TEXT BALLOONS

Zach's 5th book was more time consuming to get into the BookSmart program. He used text balloons in this book for the first time. They were a challenge. 

I wanted his book to be as authentic as possible BUT his printing in the balloons was hard to read.  What to do? 

Here's the original (at right) and the page reworked (above) to be legible. I hope he likes it!